Angel of Death

I loved this. It was so beautiful...and it was so sad. Wow!! Sorry for the being speechless but this really made me cry. Bravo!!!

Beautiful. I love your title.

I loved this. It calmed me down because today was so freaking weird. Well anyways it was beautiful.

This is romantic in a scary way. I couldn't stop reading this was fantastic!! I loved every minute of this. :D

Wow deep! Really this was brilliant in it's own sort of way.

I'd really like to thank everyone for their advice it was really helpful. This will be finished soon, in the mean time I will be posting part of Chapter 1. ...

You really know how to mean something without actually saying what you mean...does that make sense? Well anyways I liked this. For some reason that tree reminded me of Adonis, ...

This was was short but amazing. I'm speechless...wow!! :cry: Keep up the good work

This was great, which i knew it would be. I'm happy that things are getting better for her and her dad. Her mom's coming home? wow i can't wait to ...

This is so a writer I feel the same way. What made this poem perfect was the rhyming it was synchronized...perfect...great job!!!

I like this, it's crazy but I like rap music so when I read this I can actually hear it on the radio.

This was short and to the point but it was very powerful. Yeah I agree with anyone who says smoking is just a nasty death sentence. Well anyways great poem.

I didn't expect the ending line " God is not a Man" this really made this poem dramatic and brilliant. Lovely!! Keep up the good work.

I really loved this, please write more.

okay there were a lot of things wrong with this but overall this was really great. i have to go but i'll be back to properly critique.